Critiquing Your Writing

The Value of Other Readers in the Editing Process

By Mariah Prouse

It’s not a clear fact but I assume that, like myself, many writers wish they didn’t have to share their work with others. Instead, they would prefer someone edited it before going out into readers’ hands and then they only ever hear the good things about it! That is not how it works though. 

The truth is that if we want to be successful as writers, we need to be open to critique. Otherwise, our storytelling will never grow and improve. To begin, I’m going to share the differences between Beta Readers and Critique Partners (CP) and what they can do for you and your story. 

Beta Reader:

  • Someone who reads through your book as a reader would
  • Not necessarily a writer themselves
  • Should be able to point out plot holes, character issues, and pacing. They may ask questions to clarify if they are understanding the premise of the story as well 
  • Usually avid readers within the genre you’re writing
  • There are also Alpha readers who read an early rough draft and give insight of what is working thus far

Critique Partner:

  • They are a writer as well
  • Many times you will share your work with them and vice versa 
    • Just as it is important to have readers for your work, being a CP for someone else is a great opportunity to learn about noticing what works and doesn’t within others stories
  • They will do similar notes as the beta reader but from a writer’s point of view 
  • May also help with sentence structure and overall edits 
  • Extra helpful if you find one that has strengths where you lack and vice versa
  • They are as serious in the craft as you are
  • They usually either read or write within a similar genre

Now you found a possible Beta Reader or CP. First thing you’ll want to do is share just the first three chapters (at the most) with the reader. As much as you want it to be a right fit for you, you also want to make sure your writing voice or the story is a fit for them as well. Here are some things to consider:

  • Be clear what feedback and relationship you’re looking for
    • They might be just looking for feedback while you’re looking for someone to bounce ideas off during the drafting process. Be open about those expectations
    • Don’t force something that isn’t meant to be. There are other readers out there who will probably have the same wants and needs as you do
  • Communication is key! 
  • Some share a question sheet to ask for specific information 
  • What communication style works best for you?
  • Check out their Goodreads and see their reviews and what they like to read 
  • It’s important to be clear if you want brutally honest, or gentle feedback
  • It’s also important to point out what you enjoy and what works within the story
  • Have a schedule or deadline for feedback but make sure it is realistic
  • Honestly, finding a reader is almost like dating. It can be a long-term relationship so be certain this is someone you want a lasting relationship with. If that isn’t what you’re looking for, be clear of that in the beginning
  • Most importantly, don’t share their work with others! 

Make sure, if this is someone new you are working with, that you trust them. Yes, unfortunately you cannot know for certain that the person you’re sharing your work with will be a decent human being. That is why it is not only important to share those first three chapters, but also to get to know the reader before you share your entire manuscript with them. It does involve a certain amount of trust and common sense. Watch how they interact on social media and with other writers, where applicable. Be careful of how you share your work and how much you share at a time. And remember that the feeling should be mutual and they should expect you to be respectful with their work.

Important Note: Another thing to consider is a sensitivity reader. We may be unaware that something may be harmful within our stories to others, especially minority or marginalized individuals. In our current world, with so many hurtful things out there, we do not want to add to that. Take the time to find someone who can give insight on potential problems within your book. Bounce off ideas with your trusted writing community who will point out potentially hurtful ideas or concepts.

Hope this was helpful. If you have anything to add, reply in the comments below! 

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